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Back to You -EQD ATG by RyuuKiba Back to You -EQD ATG by RyuuKiba
MINI STORY TIME! (scroll down if you don't want to read it)

"Back to You"

It hurt, it hurt more than anypony could understand, more than anypony would even imagine.
Rarity lay absent-mindedly on a pile of pillows she had meant to pick up from the ground just moments before. Her attention had been caught by a gem she thought she had lost... the bright red glow of the beautiful stone illuminated her face.
Thunder fell somewhere far away and rain slowly began tapping on the roof of Carousel Boutique while the beautiful mare let herself slip to memories of days past, of the day Spike had given her that Fire Ruby.

It had been three years since last she had seen the little dragon, the day before he ran away to join the war against the Ibex kingdoms; three long years of not knowing what had become of Spike.

Rarity had known of his crush on her for a long time, and dismissed it as just Spike growing out of childhood. Though more than once the dragon had shown he was nearly as mature as her, and that his small body was only due to the slow growth-rate of his species.

Rarity closed her eyes, trying to ease the pain in her heart as she remembered the night before his escape, when he had finally succeeded in expressing his feelings for her. She had rejected him as tactfully as she could... As mature as he were, he was a baby dragon, it would have been scandalous, outrageous… illegal even.
But she knew all too well she had begun to feel a certain attraction to him since his act of selflessness in giving her the Ruby and how he defeated his inner demons to save her and Ponyville from himself. These feelings terrified her, and in her panic she had hurt Spike's feelings.

It was because of her that he left.

And now her longing for his friendship and company, the fear he might be gone forever, and the nights spent awake arranging her thoughts of him had strengthened the side of her feelings for him that crept much deeper than friendship alone... but now... he was not there... The war had ended... but he-

knock, knock, knock

She turned to look at the door with a puzzled expression, had someone knocked at her door? With that ghastly weather outside? Most likely it was important!

Rarity quickly got up and shoved her melancholy into a mental chest.

"Coming~" she called out.

Her magic twisted the doorknob and pulled the door open.
At first, the figure behind it backed off a couple of steps into the rain, making it impossible for Rarity to see who it was. Whoever it was, though, was most likely a stallion, for he had the bulk and height of Big Macintosh!
She stepped outside cautiously, and her eyes adjusted to the dim light outside.

Her eyes widened and a falling sensation invaded her body when finally she managed to see who it was. There, standing on four strong claws, water dripping and cascading down his thick scales and pony-like physical structure was Spike.

She knew it was Spike... even with how very different he looked from the tiny bipedal creature she had known for so long. He had grown, he had survived and thus had grown and now was back home.
Then she noticed the scars, each and every gash that had healed hastily into everlasting mementos of the battles he had fought. An especially nefarious cut had gone straight over his right eye, his eyesight most likely saved by a unicorn's quick magic. Even one of his tough spines was missing its tip.

Rarity's heart froze before feeling the unbearable pain of knowing Spike, little Spike had been mangled and beaten for three years on end! The dragon she had finally fallen for in his absence had come back hurt and bearing the marks of war's torture.

"Hello, Rarity..." he said, his voice now deep and caring.

His words finally pulled the mare out of her shock and she galloped into the rain to him, throwing her forelegs around his broad shoulders.

She wept, wailing and screaming into the base of his neck. All her inability to help him, all the pain of uncertainty, all the suffering of seeing how he had fought and how he had hurt was pouring out of her in tears.

"S-spike!" She screamed into him, holding tighter.

She couldn't manage to say anything else as her heart continued to pour out of her into a cascade of emotion and the final relinquishing of the hurt from three years.

The dragon's neck bent down to press his head against the back of hers, trying to soothe her. His own tears fell silently and calmly as the unicorn shivered and he lifted one of his own forelegs to embrace her.

"I'm so sorry, Rarity..." he whispered.

"N-no... I am!" she answered, unable to fully calm herself. "You lived t-through that horror because of me! Because I c-couldn't-"

"Rarity, it wasn't your fault. I decided to go. I ran away, it was my decision. I hurt all of you."

There was no answer as the unicorn slowly calmed down. Sobs and shivers still coming in short spurts.

Finally she pushed gently on his shoulders with her hooves to look into his eyes, the emerald eyes that now glowed with the wisdom and gentle strength of an adult.
She thought of what to say, on what to do. What was left to say? Insist it was her fault? No... This moment was too precious, too liberating for that... and so she did the only thing she could think of, and pressed her lips to his.

Spike was back... and she was ready to accept the truth, to tell him she loved him.

-The End


Music to close the story with: [link]
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Ok! so Day 4 of Equestria Daily's Artist Training Grounds: MOCK WAR event!

"Draw a Pony Going Home"

Well... I made Spike... so... uh... still counts right? Lol
And this is yet another pairing I ship XD lol

Borrowed my own idea of Virtue Spike for this entry! It just made so much sense! (this is actually a single panel for a short 1 page comic which I couldn't finish on time).


MLP:FiM, Spike, and Rarity belong to Hasbro, Developed by :iconfyre-flye:
Ponyville in the background tweaked from :icontrotsworth:'s epic vector
Art and Adult Spike concept by ME!
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:iconphilosiphermonkey:
PhilosipherMonkey Featured By Owner Edited Apr 2, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Isn't it WRONG to laugh?
The more better question would be: Isn't it RIGHT to laugh?  
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dragon567lover Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015  Student Digital Artist
right in the feels man *hits chest*the feels
i put the music on and looked at the pic
i swear my heart fell in two then put it back togather
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:iconr3l14nt94:
r3l14nt94 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i'm not crying just got liquid pride :'(
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:iconnepkatluvr:
Nepkatluvr Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So beautiful!
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:iconignatian-mystic:
Ignatian-Mystic Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014
Why can't I,

Hold all these feels?
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:iconraine-343:
Raine-343 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
Who told you that you could make me feel those feels?!?!?
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:iconryuukiba:
RyuuKiba Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Professional Filmographer
My hamster totem! *dances around all tribe-like*
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:iconshadowstyle143:
Shadowstyle143 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Must have been some war
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:iconmultiverse13:
Multiverse13 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014
A soldier finally coming back from a bloody war and his love throwing herself into his arms. Pure poetry
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:iconchromafusion:
ChromaFusion Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I couldn't help but to tear up, this was so well drawn, and the fic is so well-written, even if it's just a segment.

Goodness me, this should be continued.. or at least what has happened before this picture..

Just, wow.. So much emotion..
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:iconryuukiba:
RyuuKiba Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Professional Filmographer
Thanks! ^^ I'm glad I could make something with a good enough quality to express emotion. 
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:iconchromafusion:
ChromaFusion Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You've done a wonderful job~
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:iconmickeymouseisgay:
Mickeymouseisgay Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014
So is this part of the show or is this a fan fiction
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:iconryuukiba:
RyuuKiba Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Professional Filmographer
fan fiction :3
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:iconmickeymouseisgay:
Mickeymouseisgay Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014
Kk
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:iconmickeymouseisgay:
Mickeymouseisgay Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014
Spike certainly got bigger
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:iconknightr33:
knightr33 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013
Is this based on a fanfic i would love to read it for it.
 
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:iconryuukiba:
RyuuKiba Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Professional Filmographer
Nope, it's just that short story... The Image and text have been used as basis for fanfics though... Can't recall their names though :C
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knightr33 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013
.....t.t.... my hopes have been dashed.
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GlitterQueen Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013
Love the story!
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icedude1994 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013
OMG THEY MUST MAKE AN EPISODE OF THIS U MY FRIEND IS A GENIUS THINK OF THE DRAMA THE FEELING AND THAT MUSIC IS BEAUTIFUL U DESERVE PRAISE (yet i'm just a viewer but it's allways better than nothing)
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oOTheMasterOo Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013
I LOVE this story !!!!!!



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:iconchrismilesprower:
Chrismilesprower Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Wow this is amazing.
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:iconmyfoot132:
MYFOOT132 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013
YES
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:icontheflimflambros:
TheFlimFlamBros Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013
Holy crap! I finally found you!

Just wanted to say thank you for making such a great looking pic! I used this as the cover of my fic "For the Ones we love" and it was highly successful. So thank you.
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:iconryuukiba:
RyuuKiba Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Professional Filmographer
well, glad to know you liked it. I do hope the image was sourced correctly ^^u

Anyway, thanks for the compliment and for looking for me XDD
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Spyrofan1310 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013
Spike: "Death cannot stop true love"

Rarity: "I will never doubt again"
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:iconethorrorgamer:
ETHorrorGamer Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Amazing and beautiful
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SPIKE--the-dragon Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013
they were not tears of sadness, but rather tears of joy, but for my dear Rarity, I cannot say the same, but I do believe so after she lead herself to think past all of the hardships of war I had experienced, and to realize that I was back to her, to stay, because it was only then she realized how much she loved me
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:iconx-factor109:
X-factor109 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
This should have a sequel.
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GoldenWolf1621 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Student Artisan Crafter
aawwwwwwww
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zoeyluverCG Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Soooo cute T_T the feels X3
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:iconsdrseries:
SDRseries Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013
SO CUUUUTE!
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:icongalacta:
galacta Featured By Owner May 31, 2013
beautiful ;3; so much emotion in the story and the picture~
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MisterKaos Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful......
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SPIKE--the-dragon Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013
the first non sexual related comment I have ever seen you post of me and her
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:iconmisterkaos:
MisterKaos Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconohyouplz:
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twizzletwist Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
beautiful just beautiful
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Reaver75 Featured By Owner May 1, 2013
I think this story would remain better with this song.
[link]
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Astroanimations Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Vi una vez la imagen pero no me puse a leer, pero ahora me gustó mucho la historia y a la imagen se siente todo el sentimiento de la escena. Bien hecho
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:iconking-76:
King-76 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Dude, that was so moving. Make a comic out of this, bro!
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:iconryuukiba:
RyuuKiba Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Professional Filmographer
I'm afraid I've lost motivation for original pony projects ^^u but I got other projects I'm working on that will hopefully catch your interest
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:iconking-76:
King-76 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, dammit, o well, that's ok.
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EmberzSolar Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
May I make a pmv off of this to put on you tube?
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:iconryuukiba:
RyuuKiba Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Professional Filmographer
Go right ahead, just please credit me in the description or something, link back to my dev pls.
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EmberzSolar Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks a heap i sure will
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Otterro Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the story and the picture there both amazing!
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dvdsnsam Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Student Filmographer
Good job on both the art and the story behind it. This story could be expanded much longer and have kept my attention. Keep up the good work.
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